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1. Iran should be added to the title.   2. Time and place of the study should be added to the abstract.   3. It should be mentioned in the abstract which group had more psychological and behavioral symptoms with p-value.   4. The manuscript needs exact proof-reading by an expert editor.   5. Key-words should be selected from MeSH.   6. First sentences of the introduction should be summarized substantially. In addition, introduction is too long and should be summarized.   7. Name of the pandemic should be used consistently. Covid-19 or COVID-19?   8. Any abbreviation like ASEBA should be used in full-term for first time.   9. Language of the scales and their psychometric properties should be mentioned.   10. Table-1 is not clear and content should be corrected. Second part seems to be age of children. Does it?   11. Order of groups in tables should be consistently. First case and secong control.   12. 'According to Table 2, the mean scores of children's psychological and behavioral symptoms differ between the group of mothers working as health care workers and the control group.' is not correct. Table-2 is about gender.   13. Repetition of p-value is not useful here:   This means that the children of mothers working as healthcare staff have higher scores in depression, and aggression than children in the control group (p <0.0125). In addition, why p <0.0125? The exact value or p<0.05 should be used.   14. What`s 'Coronaanxiety' in Table-3. It is not described in the methods.   15. N column is not useful in the table-3.   16. Due to culture-bound aspects of the topic, place of the studies comparing with current results should be added to the text.   17. Limitations and suggestions for future studies should be mentioned substantially.   18. Conclusion structure is not satisfactory at all. Any numbers or statistical values should be removed and main findings and interpretation should be mentioned very briefly.   19. The authors can see newly published Research Topics 'Mental Illness, Culture, and Society: Dealing with the COVID-19 Pandemic' for improvement of their paper and cite some of their papers.

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